Wednesday, March 7, 2012
Unfamiliar passage.
Creatures captured. Punished. Their chest pounding as they breath heavily. Squashed between a flat wooden boulder and a shimmering glass. There was no escape. The cell was surrounded by barriers of gliding, sealed in prison by mechanical gates and poisonous sticky substances secured the gaps. Been engraved with faded historical patterns, distracting the unseen feeling of lament from the creatures. Even if they were able to move around, the chance of survival was slim, as they were then.
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I'm still trying to figure what this is, BUT I STILL CAN'T. Nonetheless this is really detailed and descriptive :)
ReplyDeleteIt sounds pretty horrific but I can't figure it out.
ReplyDelete1. What are barriers of gliding?
2. This sentence is ungrammatical: Even if they....as they were then.
Could be a work of genius - I just don't know. What I do know is that it is certainly original and challenging. I think you have good control of varying your sentence structures for effect. Now, if I could just work out what it is...